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[The above work of fiction contains shipping]

This was made as a birthday gift for a good friend of mine. I'm actually uploading it by his recommendation.

The title is just a placeholder until I come up with something more interesting. (If I come up with something more interesting)

This is my first attempt at fan-fiction, so harsh criticism is welcome and expected.

This story contains and references characters and settings that belong to Lauren Faust and/or Hasbro.

[UPDATE]
This story now available on Google Docs: [link]
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sunblaze32 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
I get the feeling that this is set just before the episode "Applebuck Season"
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:icongoodstnero:
GoodStNero Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Mmhmm. I remember wondering how Big Macintosh got hurt, and I thought it'd be a good focal point for the story.
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warriorsbella10 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
this is to hard to read can you make a different version of this DA style
report back to me please!!! :eager:
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:icongoodstnero:
GoodStNero Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If you check the description, it links to a google docs version. And if you don't like the google docs version, that version is easily downloaded and changed to another style.
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CodWars Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
awwwww
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superfan001 Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
This story is so wonderful :D I love it. It's so well well written too. A little mistake here and there, but other than that, completely fine. I love how you type Big Mac and AJ's accents :meow: I hope you'll type more FlutterMac soon :D
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:icongoodstnero:
GoodStNero Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Many thanks for the kind words :D
It was always my intention to leave this as a one-off, but it seems like a lot of people want some sort of follow-up. I may have to consider it. ;)
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superfan001 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012
You're welcome dear.
Oh yes, I'd want to see a follow-up of sorts ;p
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awesomefacegirl101 Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
purple hiar she has purple hair?
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:icongoodstnero:
GoodStNero Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Her hair always struck me as more of a very light purple than a shade of pink.
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awesomefacegirl101 Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Hmmmm... OKay!
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LinkxSheikLuver Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012
Are you going to continue it? I love how it is going so far. All the characters are spot on! :3
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:icongoodstnero:
GoodStNero Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm glad that you like it. :D

I actually don't have any solid intentions to continue this one. I'd like to leave it as just a scene. I have thought about maybe doing a follow-up short scene, but it's a relatively low priority.
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kittykthxbai Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011
I was totally blushing and giggling through the whole thing~ xD
I love your writing style,and this story was purely adorable. <3
As you can probably see by my avatar, I adore this couple. xDDD
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:icongoodstnero:
GoodStNero Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm very glad you liked it. :D
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danvid23 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011
Amazing fan fic!
Part 2 :D
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:icongoodstnero:
GoodStNero Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Many thanks. :D
I don't think there will be a part two, though. I'd like to leave it where it is. I might be putting out some new stories over winter break, though. :D
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ProfessorVermo Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Absolutely wonderful! The writing is excellent, the characters portrayed marvelously, and I could feel all the emotion Big Mac and Fluttershy felt. You also managed to work it into an exact point in the timeline that was never fully explained.
This receives my highest seal of FanFiction approval! It's Practically Canon!
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:icongoodstnero:
GoodStNero Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, many thanks for the kind words. :D
I'm very glad that you liked it.
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GalacticRainbow Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Like, do they like each other on t.v.?
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Rabbid-Cat Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012
I wish, that'd be cute.
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:icongoodstnero:
GoodStNero Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah. Nope, afraid not. It's completely shipping.
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GalacticRainbow Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
i was wondering...are they leget?
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:icongoodstnero:
GoodStNero Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How do you mean?
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ZeldaTheSwordsman Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011
D'aww. I like this pairing, I really do.
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:icongoodstnero:
GoodStNero Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's a good one, I think. :)
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ZeldaTheSwordsman Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011
I also like Rarimac.
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JiMMY--CHaN Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Student Artist
This was very good. The writing was fantastic!
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:icongoodstnero:
GoodStNero Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Many thanks :D
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JiMMY--CHaN Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Student Artist
It was no problem! Are you planning on writing more?
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:icongoodstnero:
GoodStNero Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have an ongoing story right now that I'm working on, and a couple of other rough ideas that I may eventually get to. I don't know if I'm going to do any more with this specific story, though. I'd kind of like to leave it where it is.
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JiMMY--CHaN Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2011  Student Artist
It's cute how it's been set so I agree with you there.
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ToadLink Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011
Aw, that was so cute. And it also explained how Big Mac got hurt and could not work for that AppleBuck episode. Good work.
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:icongoodstnero:
GoodStNero Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Glad you liked it. :D
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ToadLink Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011
No problem, but anyway what is not to like about it.
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TheFireWolfAuthor Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011
I do love this story
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:icongoodstnero:
GoodStNero Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm glad to hear it! :D
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TheFireWolfAuthor Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011
When I found out I added it to my favorites without remebering to comment I felt awful
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:icongoodstnero:
GoodStNero Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Quite all right. :D
It's always nice to hear people's thoughts, but I hardly expect a comment for every favourite.
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TheFireWolfAuthor Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011
Ok it just didn't feel right to me
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:icongoodstnero:
GoodStNero Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fair enough. :D
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Jackerson117 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Student Writer
wont load for me
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:icongoodstnero:
GoodStNero Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's odd. It's a .pdf file being run through Google Docs.
If you have a .pdf reader like Adobe or Sumatra, you could download it and open it from your computer. It's strange that it won't load, though.
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Jackerson117 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Student Writer
yeah the download worked just fine on the part with the bunnies and the apples but deviantArt text is easier on my eyes. White and black kind of strains
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GoodStNero Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah. I tried to upload it as deviantArt text initially, but it kept getting all kinds of weird HTML stuff in it.
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Jackerson117 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Student Writer
OMG that was great, was kind of hoping for a little more romance in the last paragraph but I'm satisfied
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:icongoodstnero:
GoodStNero Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm very glad that you like it :D
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garetix Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2011
This is a brilliant piece of literature. It has very few mistakes(almost none that I can see), spelling or otherwise(and of course we're ignoring the fact that you didn't use apostrophes for everything, but that's alright.). You got the characters spot-on, and the Apple family's accents. I would, however, suggest utilizing a hyphen when cutting something off.

Just as alwa-
CRACK

Sorry to sound like I'm criticizing something so amazing! It really is great!
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:icongoodstnero:
GoodStNero Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Quite alright. Nothing is learned without criticism. :)

I'm very glad that you liked it so much, though. :D
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garetix Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2011
Yeah, but really, you should try writing more often. If they're even as close as good to the quality that was displayed there, I'm sure they'd be amazing.
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